The LEO thesis statement page was probably the most helpful for me. The rules to writing a thesis statement were short and to the point. The site also provided many helpful examples that went along with the point they were trying to convey.
My Thesis:
Ernesto Guevara set out to create a unified Latin American society where the people would be cared for, treated equally, and not exploited; but his inflexibility, his lack of realism, and his actions after the Cuban Revolution caused his goals to fail and his image to be stained.
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Very good thesis. Maybe you can make it into more than one sentence, but if you do not feel that is necessary, I think it is fine.
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